If you could change the ending of Stone Fox what would you change?
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oneill
9/27/2016 07:01:29 am
the ending of stonfox is that little willy and stonfox was a big ras and little willy was wening bot the dog pastout ret in front of the finsh lin and hi was sad and hi was cring bicos ston fox help little willy and shrchlit to wen the ras to gethr and thay won and happy bot ston fox het little willy in the fas and little willy fell don into the flor and hi was kring allot and little willy won the ras and hi won $500 and little willy and grampa was happy and grampa got betr and betr and the form was saf
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timare$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
10/20/2016 07:01:33 am
i agree because little willy did get smacked in the face and he did win the 500$$$$$
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Keymaree Dorsey
9/27/2016 07:04:38 am
I would say is that little willy. that they had a gun and shoot it.
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kayla keene
9/27/2016 07:05:20 am
If i was reading chapter 8 it would say after the day stone fox hit little willy in the face the the next day little willy came back to stone fox and said it is time for the race so they would get ready for the race and a man had a gun and said ready set go and he shoot the gun in the sky. then a few minutes later it was just stone fox and little willy in the race and they saw the finish line and guess who won little willy and he went home with the money and gave it to hes grandfather and they both saved the barn together they both were happy but stone fox was really mad that is how i want chapter 8 to be like the end....bye.
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tyina diaz
9/28/2016 08:38:44 am
Kayla Keene I disagre with you because in chapter 8 little willy did not win the race. Also grandfather did not save the barn because he did not help.THEN stone fox was not realy made at little willy because little willy did not win the race.That is why I diagre with you.
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janaiya
9/27/2016 07:19:43 am
If I can change the ending I would say that little willy won the 500 dollers
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kaylee
9/27/2016 09:07:29 am
i agree because i want the story to end happy
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kimberly
9/27/2016 09:46:46 am
I agree
ILENE
9/27/2016 10:10:53 am
I agree with you kaylee i want it to end happy too
VERONICA
9/28/2016 08:32:11 am
I AGREE WITH KIMBERLY TO
Karielle
9/28/2016 09:30:48 am
me too
Bellianis
9/28/2016 09:36:23 am
me to
shania
10/19/2016 06:52:12 am
I ugre with you cus that wut i wus going to sau.
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kiomara$$$$$$$$$
10/21/2016 06:38:52 am
I agree with shania
kayla
10/20/2016 06:30:50 am
dissagree with you janaiya because lw did not win the race
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joseph
9/27/2016 07:22:22 am
if i can could make a another chapter it will be when lil willy save the farm and he won
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 11:41:55 am
How would he save the farm? What would happen after he saves it?
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Kineisha M.
9/28/2016 06:57:56 am
I agree
kaylee
9/28/2016 08:49:23 am
Miss.Griffin
Aexis
9/28/2016 09:33:59 am
I agree Missgriffin
joseph
9/28/2016 07:03:39 am
he would save the farm with the money he got form the race
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juel
9/27/2016 07:23:25 am
I think that little willy was a caring person because he was no scaed and he did not bell down
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RickyRice
9/28/2016 07:05:47 am
What do you mena
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Bellianis$$$$$$$$$$$$$
9/28/2016 09:42:54 am
what do mean
kaelin
9/27/2016 07:24:56 am
L W won the race and took home 500$ to save the farm granddad got married and lived happy
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tynasia
9/27/2016 08:59:04 am
how did they get married and the don't have for the ring
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karielle
9/28/2016 09:39:40 am
I agree with you
kimberly
9/27/2016 09:45:43 am
I aggre with you kaelin
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Karielle
9/28/2016 09:37:30 am
Kimberly grandpa never got married
ALEXANDR
10/9/2016 08:32:06 am
kimberly they never got married.
Karielle
9/27/2016 09:52:06 am
Grandpa never got married.Kaelin.
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ILENE
9/27/2016 10:06:34 am
I agree with you kaelin
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anyeelo
9/28/2016 10:07:32 am
I agree ilene
Kineisha
9/28/2016 06:51:48 am
I agree because he is buenet for de farm
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alexandra
10/9/2016 08:33:26 am
I aggre with you kaelin
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timare$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
10/20/2016 07:14:21 am
i dot agree beuase lw dinnit got marred.
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TYNASIA WARREN
9/27/2016 08:45:10 am
IF I WAS TO CHANGE THE END OF THE STORY STONE FOX I WOUNLD CHANGE WHEN SERCHLIGHT DIED HE WOUNLD OF STAY ALIVE IN MY ENDING .THEN
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 11:43:25 am
Tynasia, A big part of the story is how grandfather gets sick. Could there be a way that we find out that grandfather is better? What would Little Willy do?
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kayla kkeene
9/28/2016 06:44:57 am
I agree with tynashia
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Nicholas
9/28/2016 09:01:07 am
i disagree with tynasia because maybe willy didnt win the race in your ending.
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socorra
9/27/2016 08:47:48 am
But kaelin...Who did grandfather get married with?When did he get married?Where did he get married?and WHY did he get married?
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tellyon
9/27/2016 08:53:33 am
I agree becasue where did grandfather get married
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nicholas
9/27/2016 08:56:48 am
I disagree with socorra & kalin in the story they never got married
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tiyuan
9/27/2016 08:57:53 am
i dont agree neither
jesse
9/27/2016 09:08:52 am
MS Griffin said you could change the ending
branyzha
9/27/2016 09:12:51 am
Socorra YOU ARE RIGHT BECAUSE KAELIN DOSE NEED TO USE WHO, WHAT, WYH, HOW ,WHEN HE DIDN'T USE THOSE WORDS THAT I WROT.
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mejdi
9/28/2016 08:52:54 am
you are all right
ILENE
9/28/2016 09:57:28 am
I agree with you socorra
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tellyon
9/27/2016 08:49:21 am
I would change the end to LW won the race and took home 5,000$ to save the farm from getting tookin.
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socorra
9/27/2016 08:57:39 am
So kaelin can you explan why grandfather wanted to get married?..I mean wouldn't it calst to much money???
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karielle
9/28/2016 09:43:16 am
yes
Phil
9/28/2016 08:37:34 am
I agre with you Tellon
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mejdi
9/28/2016 08:56:02 am
good ending
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mejdi
9/28/2016 08:59:46 am
Good ending
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Nevaeh bird
9/27/2016 08:50:30 am
If I could change the end I would change to that search light ran out of breath little willy said get up girl so we can win the race for grandfather. Also searchlight got up and started to run.
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Tiyuan
9/27/2016 08:51:25 am
I agree with you
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 11:44:51 am
Tiyuan and Nevaeh,
Nevaeh
9/28/2016 08:37:21 am
What would happen after that is that searchlight when he got up and ran to the finish line.
SHABAR
9/27/2016 08:54:52 am
that would be a good ending
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juel boatwright
9/28/2016 06:50:19 am
I agree with shabar
nick
9/28/2016 09:04:45 am
i agree with sha-bar because there was a wondreful ending.
tyina diaz
9/27/2016 08:58:09 am
I agree with you because it will be better that searchlight came back from the died and won the race because it was sad that searchlight died she was little willy's BFF till the end.
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Bellianis$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
9/28/2016 09:48:34 am
what do mean by that
tyina
9/28/2016 08:45:42 am
Nevaeh i kind of agree with you because I do want searchlight to live but how will searchlight run out of breath and when little willy said get up girl she migcly got her breath and start to run.
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Tyina Diaz
9/27/2016 08:51:51 am
If I can change the ending I will put little willy and searchlight win the race and they got more than $500 dollors they got $1,000 dollors and grandfather got better and can speck again. Also if I can change the story I will add" A few month later searchlight had baby's "That is what I will do to change the ending.
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 11:26:14 am
Tyina, I love that you wrote "a few months later..." That is a great way to add to the story :)
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tiyuan baker
9/27/2016 08:56:09 am
if i could change the end it would be about little willy winning and searchlight barking but little willy did not want to win because grandfather is better and was standing by the window. But instead stonefox let little willly win. thats how i would change the end.
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 05:01:01 pm
Tiyuan, You say that Little Willy didn't want to win because grandfather is better. So how would he get money to save the farm?
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Kineisha
9/29/2016 05:12:54 am
I agree
shahiem
9/27/2016 08:56:15 am
I think Stone Fox let LW win then he let his dog rest then grandpa say nice job and then they saw LW dog wake up then LW was so happy that his dog woke up then LW said good job racing.
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David Santee
9/27/2016 10:08:30 am
I agree Shahiem
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REINALDO
9/27/2016 08:58:27 am
IF I MADE A NATHER CHAPTER IT WOUID SAY THAT THAY TOOK SERCHLITE TO THE HOSPITALE.
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 11:27:59 am
I like where you are going with this. Then what would happen?
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REINALDO
9/28/2016 08:45:18 am
Well Miss griffen hears what hapends next so after serlight got out of the haspitale stone fox won the race and took there land that is all.
Phil
9/28/2016 08:46:12 am
I agree with you Zyquan because I was sad
tellyon
9/28/2016 08:41:15 am
So Reinaldo what would happen Next
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zyquan
9/28/2016 08:48:18 am
i agree with you that sl should get better
REINALDO
9/28/2016 08:48:24 am
Just read what I wrote to miss griffen.
Nevaeh
9/28/2016 08:43:02 am
I agree with you because i think that is a great idea for searchlight so he gets better.
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yuancxiel
9/28/2016 10:10:20 am
iagrerelnaldo
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zyquan
9/27/2016 09:04:36 am
thay should make a new ending because searchlight died
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kyzaiah
9/27/2016 09:10:23 am
i agree whith zyquan because searchlight is my favirite charecter
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 05:30:11 pm
ZyQuan & Kyzaiah, I agree that Searchlight dying makes the story very sad. What do you think should have happened at the end instead?
zyquan
9/28/2016 08:44:03 am
because he is lw best friend
jesliany
9/28/2016 09:57:59 am
i agree whith you too
juel boatwright
9/28/2016 06:55:27 am
I agree with you zyquan because when they was raceing ran so fast he died
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kyzaiah benton
9/27/2016 09:05:12 am
I think they need a new endingbecause searchlight died
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kaylee
9/27/2016 09:05:49 am
i want the ending to be happy so at the end it was sad because search light died. i will change the ending and say little willy was in last place then he was in first place at the end little willy won
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veronica
9/27/2016 09:14:47 am
i agree with kaylee
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ALEXANDRA
9/27/2016 10:11:10 am
I AGREE WITH KAYLEE.
MARQUES
9/27/2016 09:12:09 am
I HATED THE ENDING
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kaylee
9/27/2016 09:14:23 am
i agree because though that it was going to be a happy ending
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ISAIAH$$$$$$$
9/27/2016 10:07:14 am
I agree kaylee
kayla keene
9/28/2016 06:38:45 am
I agree with my sister kaylee because I thought that it would be a happy ending to
David
9/27/2016 10:06:09 am
I agree!
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anthony
9/27/2016 10:11:23 am
i agree
ANYELO
9/28/2016 10:05:07 am
I agree david
Ms. Mullaley
9/28/2016 08:02:56 am
Marques,
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VERONICA
9/28/2016 08:41:08 am
I AGREE WITH MARQUES BECAUSE I HATED THE ENDING TO
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ALEXANDRA.B
9/28/2016 09:35:03 am
I AGREE WITH MARQUES.
zyquan
9/27/2016 09:14:59 am
thay need to say search light wear stil going and won
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tellyon
9/28/2016 08:47:12 am
I agree with you Zyquan
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jesse
9/27/2016 09:15:07 am
if i could make an ending it would be like this instead of 500 dollars 1,000 dollars then little wille is racing searchlight dose not die and little willw splits 50%of the money with stone fox
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 05:31:33 pm
Jesse, I like this idea. Does Searchlight get sick or anything, or is she fine the entire book?
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MARQUES ANHVION LAMONT CANNON
9/28/2016 08:46:37 am
I AGREE WHITH KARIELE BECAUSE
jesse
9/28/2016 09:07:11 am
MS griffin searchlight stays happy until she gets old and pass away.
yauncxiel
9/28/2016 10:03:50 am
iagre
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Karielle
9/27/2016 09:42:19 am
If I can change the ending it will not be searchlight not dieing
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JONATHON
9/28/2016 09:39:16 am
I agree
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jonathon
9/28/2016 09:44:22 am
I agree kim
kimberly
9/27/2016 09:42:38 am
if I can change the ending of stone fox it will be that search light won the race.also that grandpa can start talking and not ues his hands to talk...bye
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anthony
9/27/2016 10:10:18 am
i aggar kim
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ALEXANDRA
9/27/2016 10:12:20 am
I AGREE WITH KIM
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VERONICA
9/28/2016 08:47:18 am
I AGREE WITH KIM BECAUSE I WOULD CHANGE THE ENDING TO
kemiah'ya
9/28/2016 09:41:34 am
I agree with you Kimberly. I would've liked for Searchlight to win too!
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ISAIAH$$$$$$
9/28/2016 09:44:03 am
I AGREE KIM.
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shania
9/28/2016 10:04:18 am
i agree with you kim.If i wus to change the end it wil be the sam thing,
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trevon
9/27/2016 09:46:11 am
I thing littel willy sacaring prson ueloigin dras fepri bol
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kimberly$$$$$$$
9/28/2016 09:40:30 am
I aagree
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niyasia
9/27/2016 09:48:17 am
I agrre Kimberly because stone fox will be whith you
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trevon
9/27/2016 09:49:36 am
I agre
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kemiahya
9/27/2016 09:52:16 am
i think lw is a nice person cause he won therace and took care of his grandfather when he was sick.
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jesliany martniez
9/27/2016 09:55:48 am
litte willy he loves his grandfather and he loves searchlight too. litte willy cares for searchlight when he dies he holds him tight.
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 05:34:35 pm
Jesliany, Little Willy does hold Searchlight tight and it is heartbreaking. Would you change the end of the story? Or would you add anything to it?
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Tiyuan
9/28/2016 08:45:42 am
i agree with you miss griffin because....jesliany did not tell how she would change the story.
DAVID SANTEE
9/27/2016 10:02:20 am
I think LW won $500.00 because he won the race.
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 05:32:18 pm
David, Then what happens after he wins the money?
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DAVID SANTEE
9/28/2016 09:55:29 am
LW will save the farm
isaiah$
9/27/2016 10:03:08 am
if i was lw and seck light die i wad be crying
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anthony
9/27/2016 10:05:21 am
it mat have a nether book b/c he soot the dog but he dot not soot the dog
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juel
9/28/2016 06:58:09 am
I disagree
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anthony
9/27/2016 10:08:02 am
he dot not soot the dog so there are going to have nothing
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ALEXANDRA .B
9/27/2016 10:09:45 am
IF I WILL IN THE ADD ONE CHAPER I WIIL SAY LW WIN.YAH,YAH.
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Miss Griffin
9/27/2016 05:33:12 pm
Alexandra, Would you just say that or would you add telling us what happened with the money?
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ALEXANDRA .B
9/28/2016 09:44:31 am
WILL MISS GRIFFIN LW WILL DO WITH THE MONEY IS HELP HES GRANDPA.
kayla jean kene
9/28/2016 06:43:47 am
I disagree because I didit want stone fox dead I almost cried at the end of the chapter
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Ms. Mullaley
9/28/2016 08:00:32 am
Kayla,
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ALEXANDRA
9/28/2016 09:44:12 am
I AGREE WITH KAYLA
kimberlyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
9/28/2016 09:36:03 am
I agree I almost cried .but I did becues I did not everyone callme cry baby
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juel
9/28/2016 06:45:55 am
I think that little willy is a great person because he did what can do and he won that chalinge and he did not stone fox stop him and they both fult bad serch light
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kayla negron
9/28/2016 06:46:21 am
i agree with kayla keene is story
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george
9/28/2016 06:50:39 am
That stone fox's dog dide and litte willy won with out stone fox.
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deviyne bailey
9/28/2016 06:57:03 am
i agree daivd san tee
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kayla negron
9/28/2016 06:57:11 am
if i was reading chapter 8 it would say after the day that stone fox hit Lw in the face the next day little wiily came back to stone fox and said it is time for the race so they would get ready for the race and a man had a gun and said ready set go and shoot the gun in the sky then a few minutes later it was just stone fox and little wiily in the race and they saw the finish line and guess what lw won the race and then he went home and grandfather and they both saved the barn and they both were happy but stone fox was mad that is how i think the chater should say the end yay
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keymaree dorsey
9/28/2016 07:19:19 am
i agree with kayla negron because she said if i was reading chapter 8 i would say after litte willy got hit in the day that little willy got hit in the face. day before the race little willy did not wont grandfather to se his face. and a man had a gun and ready to shoot the gun in the sky a few minters later it was just stone fox and little willy in the race and lw won the race.
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Ms. Mullaley
9/28/2016 08:01:52 am
Great response! What do you think Stone Fox would do to show he was mad if anything?
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DAVID SANTEE
9/28/2016 09:58:41 am
I like that Ms. Mullaley!
jesliany
9/28/2016 10:14:07 am
keymaree i agree with you too. keymaree how do you now . now the sore ua stone fox .
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daleyshka morales
9/28/2016 06:57:18 am
IF I was in the ending when searlight died I would say that searchlight got no energie and then he survive but it was a sad ending!
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rickyrice
9/28/2016 07:17:49 am
lw won the race it made grandfoht fill beter
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Nayeliz
9/28/2016 07:20:32 am
I geat will kayla n beceuse she siad stone fox and if to read chaptr 8 to me I me konw will feel.
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Chantel Perez
9/28/2016 07:21:32 am
I geat will Kayla n Beceuse wl she sid stone fox and IF to read chaptr 8 to I me konw wl feel
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Nayeliz Perez
9/28/2016 07:26:33 am
I geat we chantel
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shabar lawand
9/28/2016 09:03:28 am
I agree with Kyzaiah because Seachlight I MY favorite charter to
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niyasia
9/28/2016 09:33:29 am
i agree whith you miss griffin
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trevon
9/28/2016 09:36:45 am
I agre miss mullaley
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Alexis
9/28/2016 09:43:54 am
My end will be that LW safe the house and his grandpa
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trevon
9/28/2016 09:46:09 am
I agre niyasia
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anthony$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
9/28/2016 09:57:07 am
it is going to be a noing book of stone fox
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iveils lopez
9/28/2016 09:57:51 am
i think little willy is a caring person becuse he look out for his dog
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jeiriel c.
9/28/2016 10:03:21 am
lw sad to granfadr af he want the food dat wali granfadr and he sad no
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DAVID
9/28/2016 10:09:06 am
I will say '' LW saved his farm''.
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iveils
9/28/2016 10:10:14 am
i think little willy a caring person becuse he iook out for his dog
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kaelin
10/19/2016 06:49:59 am
iveils you mean little willy is a caring person because he took out for his dog
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oneill
10/19/2016 06:50:34 am
I do not agree because he is not a don't dont agree
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